Tuesday, September 22, 2009

HW 2 - Comments 1

(Comments to Ariels page)
Great stuff. You made some interesting connections between Banachs words and your own. You depicted some great imagery with your own words, allowingme to both visualize and see a connection of my own to your text. Im beginning to think that you were able to feel some sort of "absolute freedom" within yourself when you arrived here in NY as opposed to your old life back home in LA. It seems as though you lead the life of the ordinary outcast from another state like seen in all those movies haha. Unless thats just how i choose to see your life because of what i am exposed to due to television and such (whole different topic). i think to further expand your post or some ideas for your next one you can explore your opinions on why Banach COULD be right, or if you did agree with him, why. You did mention however the significance behind his words if he were to be correct. I wonder if i myself have friends that i choose to let in or ones that are able to read and understand me or are thinking exactly what i am thinking. i have an idea of who those friends are in my life, so i believe some do share similar thoughts and everyone is not 100 percent "absolute individuals". Your words about those who either connect with you or pretend to also reminded me of todays lecture about who's real and who's fake. Good stuff.

...CHris OVer and OUtt

(Comments to Leticia's page)
Great stuff. i like the way you started off by quoting Banach and how you interpreted his words into your own. Although i must admit grammer became a very small issue in your post, but in the end was still an issue. I understand where you stand on Banach's words, but im still not so clear as to what Banach was truly saying, not in your own words, but if someone else were to interpret his words how would they go about? I noticed a connection between the class's discussion as a whole, to your words where you mentioned in your post how u both agree and disagree with Banach's words. I guess if you were interested in expanding your post, or an idea for future posts, you could write about both sides you agree/disagree over with Banach, and maybe you could find a connection between the two and his words. Good stuff

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